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      dsb520 发表于 10-12-2013 21:55:37
      Pyree 发表于 2013-12-10 21:37
      OK.

      Review: An explosive beginning, the story is well paced with suspension at the right place  ...

      I agree with you. Two important pionts that this story teller should address to clarify:
      First, why Y complained that you slept with her husband?
      Second, how did you know so many details about the relationship between Y and S, especially that 'one night stand'?

      All in all, you set an attractive scene at the begining, leave much suspension in the middle, but finish with a boring ending.     
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      maggiett 发表于 11-12-2013 09:30:16
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       楼主| babydoll1 发表于 11-12-2013 11:10:53 来自手机
      本帖最后由 babydoll1 于 2013-12-12 11:12 编辑
      dsb520 发表于 2013-12-10 21:55
      I agree with you. Two important pionts that this story teller should address to clarify:
      First, w ...


      that's interesting. actually she has accused me to be many things, firstly, she thought i was S's parents, then GF, now i dont know what.

      i think she's mistaken me for S's friend now. who left adelaide a while back.

      maybe i should sue for defamation.

      as to how i came to terms with everything, professional skills and training. like i said, i dont know what happened that night, so, made an educated guess. i take minutes at work, so i can remember everything. big deal?
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      alexanderfly 发表于 11-12-2013 11:25:49
      我觉得吧,一个前女友 一个现女友。。。。这个上海房东好福气呢。。。直接双飞吧。。。
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      dsb520 发表于 11-12-2013 13:34:50
      alexanderfly 发表于 2013-12-11 11:25
      我觉得吧,一个前女友 一个现女友。。。。这个上海房东好福气呢。。。直接双飞吧。。。

      呵呵,朋友add the punch lines
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      kukiy123 发表于 12-12-2013 00:21:35
      ................
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      maggiett 发表于 12-12-2013 07:18:14
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      马西莫 发表于 12-12-2013 12:04:05
      不好 做好人真的不好
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      lpj23216 发表于 12-12-2013 23:02:17
      。。。。。。傻眼了。。。。
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      snowtiantian 发表于 13-12-2013 01:26:06
      有附帖没主贴怎么行呢
      http://s01.51dl.pw/c.php?u=rb2OogIRnSS8opnqhdVheJBNZv%2BbW1M%2FpPgXwr%2BlDZGDlEOl5%2B37FC0rVfb%2BfxJV5NaIMA2v2CUzjnR3Yger2A9M5937%2FLqoFiWdVg%3D%3D&b=29
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